12 Comments to “Reflections…”

  1. Moosa Sharif

    Dec 2nd, 2013

    Bhains ki dum… Last stanza last lines…. Rugg kaat, rooh khainch, dum torr!

    Absolute gem!

    • ali488

      Dec 3rd, 2013

      hahah thanks Moosa. The last lines are my favorite too, really love the meaning that they convey

  2. Munis

    Dec 3rd, 2013

    I like the flow in this one , emotions flowing through

    • ali488

      Dec 3rd, 2013

      Thanks. Maintaining the flow while keeping the structure intact was the real challenge here

  3. Rida

    Dec 3rd, 2013

    waooo, amazing and creative and obviously sorrow

  4. Saad Rashid

    Dec 9th, 2013

    Great Stuff!!

  5. @farheenabedi

    Dec 9th, 2013

    The laaast part! OH MY. (Y)
    Loove eet!

  6. annette

    Oct 27th, 2014

    shuderring life is not easy, we should take what it counts….trashy to trashy…

  7. annette

    Oct 27th, 2014

    miracle….thats life…i could retell…


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