25 Comments to “Nostalgia”

  1. sumaira ahmed

    Sep 8th, 2012

    Wow this is such an amazing surprise.. you literally made the painting worth something! Thank you! And the writing is totally what i felt whilepaintin it …you read my mind :) … Awesome!

    • ali488

      Sep 8th, 2012

      hahahhaha the painting is already worth a lot.. it is indeed very nice.. as for the feeling.. this was the picture i thought of the minute i selected the name “nostalgia” . Thanks for liking it :)

  2. Samreen Javaid

    Sep 8th, 2012

    nicely written.. and awesome work by the painter…

  3. Nabeel Ahmed

    Sep 8th, 2012

    Wohh!!! I never thought you could write such amazing poems…welcome to the family :)

    • ali488

      Sep 9th, 2012

      hahaa thank you brother.. i have been writing since God knows when .. I have heard you write well too :)

  4. Munis

    Sep 8th, 2012

    Good stuff :)

  5. sadia zaheer

    Sep 9th, 2012

    is too gud.. :)

  6. Shabeeh

    Sep 9th, 2012

    nice poetry ali

  7. Wafa

    Sep 9th, 2012

    That is so touchy! and so deep!

  8. Fatima

    Sep 9th, 2012

    memories! hopes! & ur poetry.. epic

  9. Shayaan Meer

    Sep 11th, 2012

    This is beautiful…. Something I can really connect to especially the couplet at the end:

    "clear was the vision crystal as the river..
    flowing on the hopes of a new found life…"

    It's strange how we are all so different from each other and yet we all experience similar things :)

    • ali488

      Sep 11th, 2012

      Thank you for liking it so much Shayaan. We may be all different in how are life goes on… but the experiences we share are often similar

  10. arfeen

    Sep 11th, 2012

    nice one …

  11. Saleem amir

    Dec 25th, 2012

    A wonderful poem indeed!
    I remember my childhood although a long time has passed since. I'm 68 you know! I remember flying kites from our rooftops with my elder brothers; who passed away a few years back. those bicycle rides to college,those wonderful summer-evenings when i used to go to play soccer with my friends. Especially,the day before the Bakra eid when I and my father went looking for Bakras.
    I wish i could go back in time. Thanks a lot for this poem!

  12. Farheen A.

    Oct 16th, 2013

    Beautifuuul. :')


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