30 Comments to “The jade pendant”

  1. Moses

    Aug 31st, 2012

    😐 ….sub dhoka hai mere dost!

  2. Wafa

    Aug 31st, 2012

    That's a perfect story. Why don't you try for a novel?

  3. @Afrin_Abbas

    Aug 31st, 2012

    kia imagination hai! :p

  4. Nida Ghazanfar

    Aug 31st, 2012

    Nice!! 🙂

  5. Anum Batool

    Aug 31st, 2012

    I find little cuteness and much warmth in it. Deep imagination! 🙂

    I would suggest you to re-read it for few spelling/typing errors.

  6. Samreen Javaid

    Aug 31st, 2012

    wah ali … 🙂

  7. Samreen Javaid

    Aug 31st, 2012

    I'm waiting for its sequel episode 🙂

  8. afshan

    Aug 31st, 2012

    wow ali ! I never knew you can write such pieces as well ..i mean thats not your genre (thanks for spelling BTW) 😀 Well done !

  9. Munis

    Aug 31st, 2012

    very very nice I imagined this story quite well in my head ! 🙂

  10. Sumaira Ahmed

    Aug 31st, 2012

    really nice ali… never knew you could write abt such stuff too! impressive i must say!

  11. osama

    Aug 31st, 2012

    good job. I liked it a lot.

  12. Zuhair Wasay

    Sep 1st, 2012

    Simple but not stereotyped. Nicely done 🙂
    This some how reminded me of Twilight. Don't know if it's a good or a bad thing :p

  13. sadia zaheer

    Sep 1st, 2012

    its short, simple and beautiful story… 🙂

  14. Fatima

    Sep 8th, 2012

    nicely written 🙂
    close enough Ali

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