Posted on 22. Nov, 2011 by Ali Abbas in Todays Thought, Urdu Poetry
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Tags: خالق, عبد, منزل, وحدت اور عشق, کببریا
Anum
Nov 23rd, 2011
Waah! Absolutely classy!
Duri
Nov 23rd, 2011
Yun tau ha anjam e safar aik sab ka …
alas! whatta piece .. I likes it! : )
Ali Abbas
Nov 23rd, 2011
thankyou for liking it … i love this line the best too
Ali Abbas
Nov 23rd, 2011
@anum: thanks : )
fatima
Nov 23rd, 2011
as usual .. alla writing
Ali Abbas
Nov 23rd, 2011
@fatima: :'(
@sam: thnks
sAm
Nov 23rd, 2011
bohut khuub…
Ainy
Nov 23rd, 2011
bohat umda!
zafar
Nov 23rd, 2011
beautiful…….since i have been reading u…..you r doing better and better ……..now WISHES for THE BEST…
Ali Abbas
Nov 23rd, 2011
@ainy: shukriya : )
@zafar: thanykyou for being a consistent reader of my work. I will try to deliver better each time
moosa
Nov 23rd, 2011
aik tou bhai ki urdu bht kumzor hai…
magr jitna samajh asaka uss hisaab se I guess its not the right piece jis pe mai chhaangay marun ya mazaq wazaq karun…. (Respect) !!! loved the last shair though!!!! 
Ali Abbas
Nov 23rd, 2011
@moosa: hahaha bht bht shukria chahnga na marnay k lye
shabeeh
Nov 23rd, 2011
awesome piece of poetry ali. its First time i read ur poetry and did not find any mistake
Ali Abbas
Nov 24th, 2011
thanks, humbled