20 Comments to “Inquisition”

  1. AA

    Nov 17th, 2011

    it feels like what you are…numb!

  2. zafar

    Nov 17th, 2011

    Excellent piece of writing….

  3. Ali Abbas

    Nov 17th, 2011

    one does becomes so… after the pain becomes a constant

  4. moosa

    Nov 17th, 2011

    🙂 pretty pretty 🙂

    excellent piece of writing!!!!

    kuch same to same bhi lug raha hai….


  5. Ali Abbas

    Nov 17th, 2011

    @zafar: thankyou

    @moosa: the essence is same… self denial

  6. Smaar

    Nov 17th, 2011

    For better or worse….time moves on. :'(

  7. Ali Abbas

    Nov 17th, 2011

    @smaar: :'(

  8. Shahzaib

    Nov 17th, 2011

    Wonderful! Directly From Your heart! but the thing is for few life goes on and for some life drag them forward! Catagoric with the intensity.

  9. Wafa Tari

    Nov 17th, 2011

    Excellent poetry…well written! MOst important very deep!

  10. Moyed Ansari

    Nov 18th, 2011

    the bad things will always follow us , so move on .

  11. Ali Abbas

    Nov 18th, 2011

    @shahzaib: true to some extent, its a matter of choice. Life plays its games and then it is our choice to move or drag on… i agree however that sometime the intensity is just to much.. its not worth living if your love is taken away.

  12. shabeeh

    Nov 18th, 2011

    good piece of poetry 🙂 tairi poetry nikharti ja rahi hai.:))

  13. Smaar

    Nov 18th, 2011

    Ali.. Still dragging it should never be the choice

  14. Ali Abbas

    Nov 18th, 2011

    @shabeeh: thanks…

    @smaar: choice or no choice.. what is meant to be will happen..

  15. Anum

    Nov 18th, 2011

    Harsh yet true.

  16. Shah

    Nov 18th, 2011

    Well Done Ali nicely written… it feels like u'r living in da state of self denial…

  17. Samreen

    Nov 18th, 2011

    welcome back to writing… ur way of tailoring situations is getting better… its true tht sometimes life shows that its actually life with no fantastic elements… i.e. its supposed to be a combo where numbness takes away the biggest weightage…and destiny becomes cruel enough to take a man towards self denial 🙁

  18. Aley Hafeez

    Mar 31st, 2012

    Great effort. You'll rock INSHA ALLAH ..

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