Goodbye my love…
Posted on 12. Oct, 2011 by Ali Abbas in English Poetry
over and over and over again …
i indulge you in nagging pain…
we say our vows…
we separate our ways…
and walk a few steps ..
never to see each other again…
the days pass with woeful silence..
the nights in blighting noises…
and then comes the solitary rain…
every single memory does it drain…
falling from the heavens…
dropping on the pillows…
sounding like weeping willows..
and as the night moves along…
i see some haunting shadows…
shadows of the past long gone…
shadows of what once belonged…
love is strange but stranger still…
is the desire to love …
is the desire to thrill..
the thirst of heart…
will it ever be fulfilled…
we both know it …
we both felt it…
the time has come…
for moving on….
for breaking the bond…
it hurts us, all this insanity…
we have been long embracing reality…
time has come for facing morality…
injustice should not rule…
give them what is their due…
i wish you live a happy life..
without me yes but not without you..
let me be the one to say this too..
let me be the reason of this pain too…
let me say what none wants said…
this is where i leave your side…
this is where we break apart…
this is where we move afar..
this is where we indeed do fly..
to cross limits of our loving sky..
this my love…
is the final goodbye!
Anum
Oct 12th, 2011
Good byes are good sometimes, for they teach us to move on.
Ali Abbas
Oct 12th, 2011
moving on is never an option… a time comes when it becomes the only option
Zafar MaliCk
Oct 12th, 2011
Beautiful.
Ali Abbas
Oct 12th, 2011
thank you
AA
Oct 12th, 2011
very nice Ali, beautiful use of words that goes straight to the heart!
smaar
Oct 13th, 2011
we have been long embracing reality..
speechless!!!
Ali Abbas
Oct 13th, 2011
@smaar: i am sorry…
shabeeh
Oct 14th, 2011
great piece of poetry.gr8 one.bht din baad amad hui hai bhai pay.
Duri
Oct 14th, 2011
I have and had liked what you wrote, but this is somewhat straight from your heart and trust me it is as beautiful as the feelings are. = )
Ali Abbas
Oct 14th, 2011
@shabeeh: shukriya janab appnay blog perha
@duri: humbled
moosa
Oct 17th, 2011
Friggin awesome!!! Loved every word every line every feel of it!!!
Loved it so much k loved the dots n !!! in it too….
Awesome man!!! this is what I expect from you now… Um talking about the standard of the stuff you write (as I know somethings never change)….
Freakin awesome!!! and I envy you k aesa mai ne kio nahi likha!!!
jo jo kehra hai dil se nikli hai dil pe lagi hai ….. Sub dhoka hai!!!
Koi nahi samjha… Koi bhi nahi!!!
Ali Abbas
Oct 17th, 2011
@moosa: thank you so much for the appreciation .. reading and re-reading your comment and simply smiling : )
also i will try my level best to maintain the same standard
Anonymous
Oct 18th, 2011
Being strong sometimes means being able to let go..if you actually did that , congrats you are soo strong
Ali Abbas
Oct 18th, 2011
@anonymous: letting go is just not my thing.. still trying to achieve it.
afshan
Oct 18th, 2011
awesome ali!
Samreen
Oct 24th, 2011
wo inter n matric mai parha tha na k shayeri esi honi chahye k baat dil se nikal k dil tak pohunch jaye…. it iz something like that…. that is what this read made me feel.
About your writing, you are maturing the art everyday… keep up the good work Ali n never stop writing… writing is your Thinngg…
Ali Abbas
Oct 24th, 2011
Thankyou very much sam. I do hope to maintain the same standards with my writing inshallah